Tuesday 26 September 2017

100 W.C. Week #3

      

                                    Creatures

 I walked into class, and dropped my books on a desk near the back. 'Professor McLangunchowdner' was printed in perfect cursive at the top right corner of the board. Then a tall slim lady walked in, 
"Hello!" she sang out,"I know my name is difficult to say so call me Ms. M!" Her hair was twisted back and tied with a purple ribbon. She wore a short purple dress to match. As she spun around to write on the chalkboard, I saw a piece of peeled back skin that revealed a layer of crocodile flesh...
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3 comments:

  1. Unknown28 September 2017 at 20:12

    Very creative story. I was not expecting the ending but it was a great twist. You have well written sentence and I can tell you pay close attention to detail. You need to check over your punctuation. You have a comma where you need a period and some line spacing where the professor is speaking that should be together on one line.

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  2. jfb574 October 2017 at 00:47

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  3. jfb574 October 2017 at 00:48

    Goodness me Mex - what a shock! you really lulled your reader into a false sense of security, thinking it was going to be a 'nice' school story.
    Very well done for an unusual use of the prompt words. i hope to see more of your work on 100WC!

    Mrs Skinner (Team 100)

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